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November 29, 2004
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Confusion and Intrusion of my heart,
when will it end, how did it start?
With a touch of the nose,
And a kiss of the lips,
my love for you grows.
Never will it dip.
Soft words. A beautiful face.
Will I ever win this race?
Falling fast, or even faster,
Falling to death, or just possible disaster...
but not for me, no, just you and him...
Can i go on living this sin?
I think I can, your pulling me in
Is it worth the pain?
Yes, yes it is, and oh so much more,
for if i succeed, i will open the door,
to a whole new world,
a world of you and I...
With a touch of the nose,
And a kiss of the lips
:iconnine-bells-of-hell:
crappy poem i wrote a few months ago... about an old friend of mine... this is kinda how i felt but i don't anymore... makes me sad...





i.m..sorry..for..messing..up...
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:iconshallowinnocence:
i likes eet, quality flow and just cute :) yet sad at the same time in a way....
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:iconnine-bells-of-hell:
thank you, and yeah, that is how i wanted it, cute, yet still sad :) :(
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:iconshallowinnocence:
well good job on achieving that nicely :)
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:iconkinneas-alkyrrn:
damn peacce of shit multy tabed......
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:iconkinneas-alkyrrn:
:Spyeed: Nice and i know the person too how weired... well talk at you in the real....
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:iconnine-bells-of-hell:
yeah, you do know who she is and yeah, i don't feel like this anymore... things have just changed alot... you know how that is.....
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